Thursday, August 18, 2005

My Latest Musing !!

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"HE" WHO IS "YOU"
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With the curtains pulled down
He welcomes you into his realm
Now in entirety He owns you
And you respond to no other sound
Your senses now His kingdom
Which He authoritatively does command
Your wish is as if it ceased
To exist,
"I am your master and you shall
Heed to none other Than Me"

Sometimes His visions seem
To shower upon you
A never ending bliss
Utopia that has been
Seldom witnessed
"Beware!!" He says
Before you soak in the pleasure
Satan’s workhorses are on their way
You try to flee but in vain

Sweat dripping down your face
You’re trapped in a maze of woven truth
Which you feel is completely misconstrued
Yet you keep your pace
Every now and then trying to steal
A quick glance back
At Them, who want you DEAD
You look for Him, your Master
Who has orchestrated this hideous spell
You trace Him not, but your assailants
Surely trace you

Your stomach knots up as
They advance upon you
Your heart quickens and your feet tremble
This cant be real
Your brain finally revolts against His will
He laughs fading away into the light
You regain your senses
And open your Eyes
Realising that it is "You" that was "He"

- Suhas Kulkarni

2 Comments:

At 11:20 AM, Blogger Saumya said...

okie suhas....explain...I don't quite get the import of this musing.....so for lowly mortals like me .....kindly explain

 
At 12:10 AM, Blogger Suhas said...

Hi.. Saumya, well i guess i went a little overboard..huh?
I hate it when people cant comprehend what I have written, just shows that i havent done a good job, Any ways...

Its basically about dreams(nightmares)

What we see as dreams or nightmares represents how our sub-conscious perceives whats happening arround us.

So the curtains refer to the eye-lids ..and since dreams do feel real sometimes...they are nothing but "a maze of woven truth"... Its only when you open your eyes you realise "Gosh it was just a
dream".....So the "HE" is just you - your sub-conscious mind...

"HE" is "You"

Well exaggerated profoundness...You may say SO...

But I say - This is the best one I have written...

(HEHEHE... You are allowed to blow your own trumpet. Doesnt hurt.. what say?)

 

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